Holy crap... that was fun to read... It had a really good flow, and I love what you're saying in it!

Bravo!

5/5

Awesome job, great flow and ease of read *~Aitch~*

I was first attracted to your heading, and this poem seems to be written by a 16 year old. You have wisdom beyond your age; that's a literary skill that you can manipulate.
Good job! I much liked this poem than the other one I read. This one showed much life.

If an adult wrote this, it would be very good...But for crying out loud, you are 13...you are such a talent!

It seems I can really relate to this one

wow!! that was really good!! i love this poem!! you ahve lots of talent!! keep it up!! :)

I really, really loved that... it's so sad... i totally understand that... i never thought that you could love someone so much you hate them... but you can... you portrayed that so well... good job

A brilliant poem, I think that many people can relate to this one and so can I!!! You ahve talent in writing, so keep them coming =0) Another masterpiece...

*Hugs Sabrina*

It's still seems like a love poem to me...lol...you must has been through a difficult relationship...don't you...well hope everything is better now...and this poem is wonderful...5/5

This is a great poem i loved it. you are such a great writer. keep up the work. i hope to see more in the future....luv and huggs....missy

Cos...in the last line...? Confussed... Great job...long but worth reading... Keep u'r head up...

XOXO Kayla

This is an excellent poem - love and hate all in one!. I rated it a 5!!