hey Max, this was really good.
I hope oneday there will be peace
all over the world.
take care,
marjan
P.S Keep writing.

soooo true

oh so true,
so sad but so true,
i love how u just write as one big paragraph, its like a big rush of emotion.
u sound very sincere.
awesome poem,
hugs,
*rach*

Great poem hun. Keep up the good work and never stop believing in God. Believe in God, for he will shine the light and help you out. And maybe someday god will help us out of the wars that we go through.

Wow max, this is so true. I loved it. keep up the good work.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Like everyone else yeah great poem so sad so true people wont live in peace so i say force them,but to not have freedom is death in itself people create death so their is no diffrence so ya great poem.

That confused me a bit but i got what you meant kind of lol its was a good one though.... nice work and nice way of saying it!

That is very insightful. ur really talented. 5/5 -k-

I like that theory. it speaks on one of the most controversial issues in the world today. i enjoy ur work cuz u speak about topics most ppl dont have the guts to speak about and most of ur poems r just n paragraph form and not n any type of stanza form. keep doin wat u doin. lata holmes lol.

TRUEE i'm saving u 2 my favourites

This is so true and there will never b peace