Dear Mel,

Very well written... Its simply superb... I guess I have to add you to my favs... Keep writing... This poem is so beautiful... I thinking I ll read that again... Bye...

How clever. You turn these words into something incredible, yet leave a deeper meaning wandering through the readers mind. Wow.. Well done. xx

This is truly phenomenal-the unique use of imagery, metaphor, and the use of color is awesome.Every line is pure poetry and so full of emotion.I love your work as it is somewhat abstract yet so full of emotion and meaning.This is oof your best yet.This piece contains so much it is impossible to comment on the greatness of it.Truly outstanding, so well written and so full of pure emotion.Sad and beautiful.

GaryJ

I love this poem. i really liked the ending. good job!

chelsea

Damn! That's it...Damn! This is awesome!

Thats awesome really. the metaphors have great imagery, props!

I really like alot :) have a good night!

Mellisa --there will never be a second to your work !

I am speechless...