Red

by moon face   Jul 22, 2014


Apple saddened cried
Red, Red beauty now holed
-"Oh sweet mother tree
why has the worm flawed me."
-"Oh Red, Red beauty but can't you see?"
"Thou pluck blessing
from thy messing."
"From your Red glee
their bellies be free
and you shall seed into me."

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    An interesting and creative write by the author.
    The writer has used the concept of a mother and child
    to bring out the feelings of a saddened apple and its
    plight; with the tree (the mother) as a guide. I also like
    the language used here which makes the read more
    effective. Well written!

    • 9 years ago

      by moon face

      Thank you for your thorough and lifting comment.
      : )))!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a very creative little poem this is. I like the idea of the red apples, and the tree, and the mother/child concept of the poem. And also, your language choice of the older English is well used, it adds more character to your poem.

    Well done

    • 9 years ago

      by moon face

      Thanks a lot for your comments. I strive towards greatness.

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