Karma

The poem definitely targeted my heart.. Excellent piece!! 😊

Unique!

Oh Luce, this is beautiful. Each line here consists of a story and it is powerful. You write each letter onto this sheet of paper, writing a poem or anything, and the ideas flow from you, (darts), representing how fast and flowy your writing is. You want to touch the readers heart with the kindness of your words but...instead there is a twist that cannot be broken. It is rare that we are touched by feelings for our own poems but.. Here you created words that have the opposite effect on you and it affects your heart. I like the approach to this poem, it it ironic in away, because too often we write for the reader instead of ourselves, and when our words make us feel good then it is truly special. 5/5

Here i disagree with you Lucero, since you've definitely got good aim and all your words are targeted directly to the readers heart...:)