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by Alicia Jane

She's finally over the past,
only good things last.
depression was her flaw,
now she's shown it the door.
frowns were her expression,
now smiles are her illustration.
she's learned wrong from right,
now her mistakes help her fight.
love was the cure for it all,
now music is the way to not fall.
she promises on her life knowing she means more,
but some promised are ridiculous and not worth caring for.
friends put her down like a fool,
now they cherish her smile that shines bright like never before.




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Submission date : 2007-10-26
Last edit : 2007-11-07

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Fading Memories ( F C ) at 2007-10-26

:) Its a very happy poem.....
Hmmm... but I kinda lyk sad poems at the moment
Very descriptive though :)
Nadia

5/5

patrick ( F P C ) at 2007-10-26

Very nice!... "frowns were her expression now smiles are her illustration" This lines are meaningful to me... I love it... 5/5

the Lady of The silver valley ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-30

Great can't wait to read it when its done. VERY GOOD, flows so nicely

Danielle ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-07

Wow! Really good!!

It describes me basically n all, lol.. very well worded... you have a way with writing :-)

Keep it up!

Danielle
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Rodney Kirby ( F C ) at 2008-08-27

HONE GREAT POEM, YES A HAPPY ONE, VERY NICE TO KNOW THAT PEOPLE DITCH DEPRESSION , THERE ARE HAPPY THINGS OUT THERE, LOVE IT.