by Alicia Jane
Submission date : 2007-10-26
Last edit : 2007-11-07
Fading Memories ( F C )
:) Its a very happy poem.....
Hmmm... but I kinda lyk sad poems at the moment
Very descriptive though :)
patrick ( F P C )
Very nice!... "frowns were her expression now smiles are her illustration" This lines are meaningful to me... I love it... 5/5
the Lady of The silver valley ( F P C D )
Great can't wait to read it when its done. VERY GOOD, flows so nicely
Danielle ( F P C D )
Wow! Really good!!
It describes me basically n all, lol.. very well worded... you have a way with writing :-)
Keep it up!
Rodney Kirby ( F C )
HONE GREAT POEM, YES A HAPPY ONE, VERY NICE TO KNOW THAT PEOPLE DITCH DEPRESSION , THERE ARE HAPPY THINGS OUT THERE, LOVE IT.