Comments : Heaven's Rainbow [Double Lento]

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    Did this one come in a dream...LOL...beautiful Lento....and you stepped up the challenge with a double.
    ~Clapping~

    Blooms slumber till morning dawn
    Perfume scent casts a spell
    Womb frozen in time reborn
    Tomb of darkness bids farewell

    I love the good-bye to Winter in this Stanza. The metophors are awesome.

    Pressing buds sprout, splendid color
    Blessings sent from heaven's high
    Caressing hands of the Creator
    Dressing the Earth thus from painted sky

    What a beautiful image this paints for the mind.
    Wonderful job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Well done on the Lento challenge! ...and a double to boot! This is a beautiful poem of Spring and all the images we associate with that beautiful season of rebirth...showers, new blossoms and a brief respite from Winter!

    "Blooms slumber till morning dawn
    Perfume scent casts a spell
    Womb frozen in time reborn
    Tomb of darkness bids farewell"

    ^love the Winter metaphors!!!

    Great job! Taker care, Debbie

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Pressing buds sprout, splendid color
    Blessings sent from heaven's high
    Caressing hands of the Creator
    Dressing the Earth thus from painted sky

    Very nice, my dear Luanne:)

    You used so many beautiful words to paint this perfect picture of Spring.
    It made me smile, crazy chickie:)

    Much love, Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Luanne,
    Oh Dear I could not pick a favorite stanza or line, I simply loved them all. Each exquisitely placed word made the poem. You provided such beautiful imagery. I got lost in the poem and found myself at each moment watching the raindrops glisten off lamp post and bouncing off the concrete. I could even smell the rain. Oh and then the most beautiful effect of the dreariness of rain you spoke of the beauty of it. Wonderful Job!
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    A beautiful picture you have created before us... wonderful word choice... superb imagery..

    I have never tried a Lento but I enjoyed reading it...

    "Street lamps admire silver droplets
    Beat of symphonic music serene
    Concrete thumping pitter-patter
    Sweet aroma of nature's green"

    ^^ the beauty of nature is so well described here...

    "Pressing buds sprout, splendid color
    Blessings sent from heaven's high
    Caressing hands of the Creator
    Dressing the Earth thus from painted sky "

    ^^wow.. this stanza is so beautifully written...
    'Caressing hands of the Creator' - the reference to God that he himself created and decorated earth with with each beauty makes the poem even more captivating...very impressive write...

    loved it..

  • 15 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Ah Luanne, its been so long since I have read one of your great poems, the 2nd stanza being my fave, its always lovely to see a great piece being created. Always my dear, Tim

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Pressing buds sprout, splendid color
    Blessings sent from heaven's high
    Caressing hands of the Creator
    Dressing the Earth thus from painted sky

    For some reason this part of the poem touches me. It shows the tender beauty of nature which we sometimes take for granted.
    A fresh write that makes the reader smile.
    Take care