Comments

Genuine Lavender ( F C D ) at 2009-09-24

You know Corrine, you are coming up with very unusual stuff and that gives your poetry a real special imprint... I'm still enchanted by the poem about Cummings till now.

Pretty nice job here, just few words but gave justice to the three topics.

Anna Stephens ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-24

This is such an intriguing challenge.....much more difficult and profound than it appears at first glance.
Very well done!!!!!!!!!

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-25

You met the challenge and very well at that. All three were easy to read and provided nice images and emotions. Well done.

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-26

Corinne
You did a great job on this piece. Your word choices for the 3 parts are awesome :)
Take care
Cindy

Lonely Rider ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-28

Thats a new to me... beautifully penned... loved the harmony part :) where you have included... mind Soul and Heart... all three together ... makes a wonderful read :)

Dixiedaisy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-05

Very Cool challenge, even better poem. I don't know how you do it with these forms you manage to pen so flawlessly. Awesome write. Congratulations on the win.

Take Care,
Kay

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-05

Congrats Corinne :)

Christopher Wry ( P C ) at 2009-10-06

I hope it won there. It is one in my book.

Seth Rowley ( F C ) at 2009-10-08

I liked this poem I just didn't understand it

billy rob ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-09

I am always amazed at how you ladies can write such beautiful, image filled verses in structured pieces. was excellent and well worth the win. Congrats! A very well done from me. Billy Rob

Miss Teach ( F ) at 2009-10-17

Again, it's like I can't experience nature to it's fullest without your poetry!

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