Ifee ( F C D )
at 2009-09-28
Well I dont know what "Edith Piaf" is , But what I know is that I read a very fantastic piece from a very talented girl..
You always use some intersting, unique words and write some unknown forms..But the best thing I like about your poetry are your titles..fantastic..Keep the good work going..
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-28
Samia,
You always have a way of making your words jump from the page and fill the minds of the reader. I can always feel the passion in your words no matter the subject. Wonderful job dear as always.
Take Care,
Kay
Directly Implied ( F C D )
at 2009-09-29
This is eloquence personified. It flows so easily and each word used is was well thought out. Passion in poetic format. Great job
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-29
Permeating,
their whispers,
^This line was extreeeeemly well written in my opinion.
Everything in this poem was magnificent. Awesome. Well done. Amazing. I dont know what else there is to say.. but you did a wonderfullll job Samia. Really loved this much. The Shardoma form isnt found around here that often, nice to see it. Well done hun
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-30
New form of poetry... never tried :)
you have done a wonerful job on this on... lovely imagery painted by such beautiful words... a rose could never have been more beautiful ...
permeating,
their whispers, resonating,
through night's silvery hymns.
^^loved these lines...
wonderful read... keep writing
Nema ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-30
Shame on me when I'm the girl of Spanish and I've never heard of this form before. lol
I love it :) it started so soft, and ended just with the same softness.
I find your title cliche though, but nothing wrong with the poem, as far as I know..
Great work Soso =)
I miss you and I'm sorry for the absence, I really am, my life's like hell over here.
Take care xx
Genuine Lavender ( F C D )
at 2009-09-30
^^^^
My title cliche?... You must be kidding!!!! It's what I like mostly here and it's the song's title representing the whole meaning...Literaly translated as: "Life in pink" , not "Love in a rose" as it might sound...
No shame sweetie and don't apologize..Strive one...
Corinne ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-30
This is gorgeous and so well written and innovative. Very fine work Samia
The Bonnie Lass ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-30
Edith Piaf was a truly great woman, very strong and yet so fragile and feminine....
I think she would have been proud to have such a beautiful verse dedicated to her.
The title was a treat on its own and not cliche, but one that indicates the scene you want to portay, the emotions you want to capture within your words.
Well done, Samia
5/5 Ingrid
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-01
WOW...your words make the poem sound so
sophisticated. I like the way these words play
when its read, liked the form too! Well done
:)
Mysterious Charmer ( F C )
at 2009-10-04
It seems you have been busy Samia. Well what can I say but this piece is amazing. Not surprised though all of your work is greatly admirable. Well done!! The visuals were truly captivating.
Take care,
Mysterious Charmer
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-05
The poetess form afar strikes againnnnnnnnnnnn!
Good for you, Samia:)
You deserved it, indeed you did!
God bless:)
Ingrid
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-05
Samia,
Congratulations dear. A very worthy win. Awesome stuff!
Take Care,
Kay
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-05
I really know nothing of structured writes, but I know an excellent write when I read it. This was hypnotic...the way you use metaphors is superb. Quite a moving write and certainly worth the win. A very well done from, me. Billy rob
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
Congrats my friend, a well deserved win :D
Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-10-06
Wtg Samia You had a for sure win :D
Illuminati RTVW ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
This is truly beautiful dear Poetess but it is the closing that captured my heart the most!
Congrats on the front page ~hugs~
Twisted Heart ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-08
Very well done, Samia... I am so sorry that it has taken so long for me to comment. With computer glitches and short of time... But I have always admired anyone who can write formed poetry. Great job
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