Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-29
Meena, you write with such passion. You captured the essences of Autumn with your words. Well done.
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-09-29
Miss Autumn is here and soon her colors will swirl.
You've done a creative write, the gypsy theme seems to fit so perfectly. Nicely written Meena
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-29
Beautiful imagery Meena
I love fall , colors and smells. Awesome :]
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-29
Oh how I adore autumn and all its splendor it has to offer. Very nice nature poem you have created here. Keep up the nice work.
Take Care,
Kay
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-30
A beautiful analogy of life with seasons... and the dawn of youth with autumn... lovely imagery...
Autumn gypsy in all her glory
twirls her colorful skirt
with a dance of lively chill
she enthralls earth from above
^^ loved these verses... specially the colorful skirt one :) cute imagery :)
Christopher Wry ( P C )
at 2009-09-30
Yes she dose.
Beautiful Chaos ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-01
I thought you used this nature piece to capture us as people wonderfully. You had some nice description.
"Autumn gypsy in all her glory
twirls her colorful skirt
with a dance of lively chill
she enthralls earth from above "
I really like this closing stanza, I am an admirer of fall myself and the skirt analogy put a wonderful picture in my head.
Good job.
The Bonnie Lass ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-01
Very nice, Meena and also very unique to call Autumn a gypsy....clever lady:)
Well done and God bless:)
5/5 Ingrid
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-01
"Months pile up
one after the other
as seasons chase to capture
their carefree days
Birth of Autumn dawns,
youths of yesterday
begin to show sorrow
like lines upon a page"
Meena, this is absolutely beautiful. The imagery and the way you describe the season is masterful. Open to a couple of interpretations. An excellent write. Worthy of a five on any site. A very well done from me. Billy Rob
Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
Beautiful. The style of expression and the language you've used is absolutely fantastic! Very good write!
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
A TRULY LOVELY WRITTEN POEM THAT CAPTURES AUTUMN FROM ITS BEGINNING AND PAINTS PICTURES OF ALL ITS GLORIES. LOVE THE GYPSY DANCING AS THE WIND BLOWS COLOURFUL AND REFRESHING. RAY S 5/5
NightFlyer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
Beautiful poem! I can see that the Autumn Gypsy is eternally young!
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
Meena
What a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery and word choices are awesome. You painted such a beautiful picture for the readers mind.....I truely enjoyed this read.
Excellent jjob!
~Bravo~
Love Cindy
Andrew
at 2009-10-07
Very good poem, love how you use a very simple yet complex poetic style, so that it wouldn't be to hard for the readers to understand.
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-11
Meena, beautiful piece...I love the entire message, and with such grace...
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Congratulations on the win.
A very deserving win at that.
Take Care,
Kay
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Yah Meena Congrats :]
The Bonnie Lass ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Wtg, Meena;)
Well deserved, dear lady.
God bless:)
Ingrid
Genuine Lavender ( F C D )
at 2009-10-12
This is enchanting, congratulations, Meena... So artistic, so fine !!!!
~Keep rocking lady~
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