Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
Wow thats a beauty... a colorful treat... dawn could have never looked so lovely as it is picturised thorugh your words...
//Fair Aurora,
Paints her sky with brush strokes of amethyst
//
lovely lines...
A sea of opal pours through gates of sleep
Pearly clouds gather like foam on timeless waves
As she pushes back the night on her turquoise tide
^^enchanting blend of colors... so wonderfully penned...
very beautiful write :)
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
My favorite time of day, a new dawn which you have described wonderfully. Well done.
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
This was beautiful. Imagery was breath-taking like looking at a painting in words.
Brilliant
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
Very unqiue and vivid descriptions... a beautiful image yourve created for us. Nicely done, (:
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-08
Simply beautiful. A colorful picture you have
drawn for the mind to see..loved this read!
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-11
Randy
You painted such a vivid picture for the minds eye. I felt like I was there watching.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Your love for the constellations and nature is very evident in this poem. Lovely write. Congratulations on your win.
Take Care,
Kay
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Congrats it was the most amazing poem :]
NightFlyer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Thank you for all your kind words. This is something I wrote last year after gazing at a beautiful Florida dawn.
Rachel RTVW ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-15
Picture painting imagery. I like the personification. Congratulations on the well deserved win!
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