Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
This is the best nature poem I've read in some time..beautiful!
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
This is the best nature poem I've read in some time..beautiful!
Kurt ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
This was beautiful. The imagery was impeccable, the transitions between stanzas basically seamless and the rhythm was flawless. Truly well done. 5/5.
OHgreenman ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
This flowed and the word usage was simple, but effective. Another great write!!
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
Little boy now turn your eye,
For the world mustn't see you cry
^^
You used such beautiful language, but for some reason the two lines above really did it for me. It tugged at my heart string big time....
What a beautiful poem, I am really impressed!
God bless,
5/5 Ingrid
Mysterious Charmer ( F C )
at 2009-11-06
Simply beautiful! From the brilliant words, to the images they created. A true masterpiece that definitely enfolds the heart.
Take care,
Mysterious Charmer
Rainbow Dancing ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-08
This is simple and sweet. I enjoyed reading it very much. Your words flowed and the rhyme was perfection. Truly a great poem
Melody
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