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Le Prince de Monte Cristo ( F P C ) at 2009-11-04

Where is this paradise?

Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-04

Absolutely beautiful :] I love nature poems, I find them soothing . Your images are vivid and awesome. :] Great flow peaceful read.

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-05

An awesome piece! So tranquil, and calming to read! I loved it :) Nature does indeed calm our heart and soul . Excellent.

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-05

Here is where I need to go, a place of peace and serinty, to just sit and take in the beauty of nature. Well done.

Lady Nik ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-05

I witness the curious squirrels peeking.
The birds fly over, in their seeking.
The earthworm wiggles out from it's loam
And I sigh and smile, this is my home.

*This was my favorite stanza. I love the mgery in this poem. This reminds me of some of my older pieces. Very peaceful and relaxing. Amazing job dear. Glad I took a look at this one. Nik*

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-06

Yes the one place that can give the heart,
mind & soul peace is nature..her beauty comes in many forms. Very Vice :D

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-06

Ooops I meant to say very nice!

Cherimari2 at 2009-11-06

Thank you all for your very nice comments on this poem...

God Bless...
Mari

alka mendiratta ( C ) at 2009-11-09

5/5.A marvellous piece on the bounty of nature.Felt totally relaxed,as fresh as after a mud pack.Keep the good work going.God bless.

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