Great poem

Very nice

I like the way you dare the reader, as you said in the bottom of your poem. Well, I agree with you..."Midnight Moon" is very fascinating and beautiful scene but behind of that scary creatures dwell. I like the way you give suspense in some parts...very interesting and well-penned of choices of word.

"But beware!
The darkened state,
where evil dwells.

Hiding in the shadows
with mesmerizing fumes,
taunting with wings,
a golden seize
like angles please."

--As I said a while ago, Midnight moon has something hidden that so scared and mysterious...I enjoyed reading this a lot. Keep writing more beautiful poems:))

"Beaming hope
beyond the slopes,
as the people that stare
an dream to dare."

--I love the way you wrote it...I like the imagery and the messages behind this part. Nicely written.

5/5
~C