Comments : Night Owl (haiku)

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This one is so so cute. Even the title can be interpreted in two ways. Though it is about an owl as a whole, night owls can also be people who stay up at night. I loved how you put the time into it at midnight, first it works well because you are talking about night and second you want a time frame within a haiku. I loved the visitor as well because you don't really know who it is leaving the reader to want to know more. Then the second line you kinda can guess who it is. Though you know in the title. You did a great job describing an owl as a whole. The imagery is stunning because each line holds it's ownstory of mystery. Beautiful work

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Perfect! Saff, you did an excellent job writing this! This is just amazing! Good job! Keep writing :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this. It is so short but just the emotion you have behind the poem makes it so beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    There is some interpretations
    nice written..

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very visual and descriptive. I like how you have included the season, time and nature into this..nicely penned.

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Wow, Saffie.. I LOVE this. I adore Owls so much! They are such majestic creatures!

    You definitely done the Haiku justice here, it's perfect. You described an owl perching on a willow tree at midnight, something that is beautiful enough... but when the owl looks your way, you see it's gorgeous bright eyes! Maybe their eyes reflecting from a street lamp or a porch light...either way, stunning image!