Comments : The cats meow(haiku/acrostic)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You have an eye for creative form Hazel! Ohhh I really adore this piece!! - nominated!

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you so much Andrea :-) wow you just made my day so much!!! :-P

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree, very creative write. sweetly penned. nice job :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very clever formed work here, it was a pleasure to read this little poem, and was nice to see you writing 2 forms mixed.

    your title should be cat's, with an apostrophe since you are showing belonging.

    nice work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Thanks saffie,I had a bit of fun with this one two, though I admit it was harder than it looked to write a haiku/acrostic mix about a cat, ha ha,I had to keep looking at my cats for inspiration, but they didn't help very much, they're very antisocial and have their airs and graces so they just looked at me as though I was mad ha ha :-P