Beautiful :)

Really wonderful and insightful poem.
Well done.
& welcome to this site.

Hello,

welcome to P&Q.

This poem sounds like a thunderstorm. A storm washing away impurities, a bit like colonic irrigation - lol.

Seriously, the meter is super and is a pleasure to read its beautiful beat. The rhyme aa,bb works well and lends itself to the pace.

All in all well done.

Take care,

Michael