Michael, Short and sweet. :) but with quite a bit of imagery here

Em

Hello Michael

I read that poem of Samia's and loved it. This too is wonderful. The more time I spend reading formed poetry, the more I enjoy it, especially these shorter pieces that I really struggle with.
To get the imagery and hook the reader with so little to work with is true art - you have it.
The alliteration here is lovely, by the way.

All the very best,
Ben

Michael, I just love this! You have described so much in such a few words, the imagery is lovely! Take care-Brenda

Hi Michael,

How vivid and lovely, the euphony is more prominent than my own poem. You do dazzling job with all poetry forms. Much enjoyed :)
Thank you for sharing.