Beautifully written. I'm slowly learning how to write sonnets, though I still feel a little intimidated by them. I just posted an attempt on a sonnet based on my frustrations of trying to write one. Anyways, this sonnet was beautiful.

Bravo, Brenda.

Your first sonnet is like a notch on a bed post. They are tricky and as Kasie wrote, a "battle"

Sometimes they just flow, whilst other times its like walking through treacle. My recent one is the latter. Lol

Your sonnet shows a complete story. A pained life made better, or at least tolerable with love. Love will keep us warm. I couldn't help laugh at the dentist's drill. Great image!

Well done dear. X

These seem to come naturally to you Brenda.
Well done,
Em

Brenda. Wow.. stunning.. this seems to come so naturally. Well done brenda.

Simply brilliant!!!! I loved every lines..., bravo!

Brenda -a sonnet!

I'm sorry I missed this one; I was away at the weekend so it passed me by.
If love can't break winter's cruel grasp then nothing can!

Syllable count is correct throughout except the first line of the couplet - I count 9 there.

Well done on this and all the best,

Ben

I barely did a thing, good woman! It's all you.

Brenda,

it looks like this is not your first...Me? I run away when it comes to sonnet hahaha..This one looks Good to me and I liked it.

So let our love melt winters cold blast,
knowing that this frigid weather won't last.
^^^
My favourite lines..lovely closing

5/5
Gel

Breathtaking, beautiful write!

I like sonnets when its written well with a flavor and that is
in this write. I can't help feel the emotions which are also
floating in it...nicely penned.