The Vase Atop the Roof - [ Shakespearean Sonnet ]

by Everlasting   Mar 27, 2014


It's true so many flowers bloom with water,
but you do not - you bloom with love, my love.
That's why this vase atop the roof is after
the petals in your lips, exquisite dove.

Just know that for no one but for you - I,
this humble piece of clay would like to fly.
It has been since the time you caught my eye.
Believe me, you got me tongue tie tough guy.

And yes, I fear no heights, though I've been told
that I can break but I don't mind. Oh God,
I want to be with you until I'm old.
For you I will defy my fate, all odds.

So even if you break me, I'll survive.
for long as you live I'll too be alive.

Written by: Lucero L.
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A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.

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  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the opening lines, it has a nice gentle touch to it. I could picture a maiden taking care of her garden with love making all the flowers bloom in joy.

    I like this sonnet and you did a good job with the rhymes and the last two lines for me, was like an inspiration...well done.