Autumn

by Everlasting   Dec 13, 2014


Outside my window
a yellow leaf clings to a twig
as if still was green

Written by: L.L.

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  • 9 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Love it. Love Autumn and Spring; there's just so much meaning in those seasons and colors ... !

  • 9 years ago

    by ron parrish

    A great message in such a short write
    almost like it was clinging to life

  • 9 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very evocative

  • 9 years ago

    by Abed

    Powerful.
    I envisioned the yellow leaf as an old person,
    the twig as life, and green as the old person's still-young soul.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Interestingly portrayed. To me it felt like everything has fallen to its death and its the last leaf still hanging on, weathering the season it clings on!

    Yes it does show strength and that is what we humans too have to learn from this little leaf! Strength...inner strength.