Ice (Acrostic Haiku)

by Maple Tree   Jan 7, 2015


I'm frozen tear drops
Crystalized love messages,
Entchings of nature.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brookie

    The fact that they are frozen brings up a lot of questions whether its a good or a bad thing (tear drops are generally seen as bad) but the way this is set up it could easily be argued that the frozen tear drops are a thing of beauty. This is interesting because You are the object of beauty and you go into more detail by explaining that you are "Crystalized love messages" which to me makes me feel as though you yourself see again beauty in something, though I am unsure of what in this specific poem. For me it raises the question what love messages, though i think i understand it.

    This is a beautiful piece to me because (for me) it shows that pain and beauty and come hand in hand, love and pain... <3

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Classy and beautifully joined. Interesting read indeed.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    AWWW..I love the fact that they are frozen! it strikes the heart much more than, if they were just falling tear drops. This actually makes me somehow relate to some of your other recent poems; being dominated and stuck a bit at some level by certain things that means best to us.

    crystallized love messages, I am sure you did not randomly choose the word crystal in this phrase here, for what it reflects and holds of meaning when combined with love.

    Beautiful Andrea...just beautiful.