Daisy come closer (crystalline)

by Mr. Darcy   May 25, 2016


Pentagonal towers of pollen
beckoning the busiest bee

michael
2016

Inspired by GB's poem: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1250768

Image:
http://cache3.asset-cache.net/gc/492408298-carniolan-honey-bee-is-collecting-nectar-gettyimages.jpg?v=1&c=IWSAsset&k=2&d=X7WJLa88Cweo9HktRLaNXkoFj7WZDJTWuMPU9UeysY4HOUja3qqIa0jLTyd%2FIhTrnjIXycWMcw%2B5AjcABWwJzg%3D%3D

Crystalline:
A two line image poem, often with a title, in which euphony is the key factor. Each line may have 8 or 9 syllables to make a total of seventeen.

or another definition:

http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?/topic/1201-crystalline/

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  • 7 years ago

    by GB

    Hi Michael,

    How vivid and lovely, the euphony is more prominent than my own poem. You do dazzling job with all poetry forms. Much enjoyed :)
    Thank you for sharing.

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thank you for your comment and your posts that inspire.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, I just love this! You have described so much in such a few words, the imagery is lovely! Take care-Brenda

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Michael

    I read that poem of Samia's and loved it. This too is wonderful. The more time I spend reading formed poetry, the more I enjoy it, especially these shorter pieces that I really struggle with.
    To get the imagery and hook the reader with so little to work with is true art - you have it.
    The alliteration here is lovely, by the way.

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, Short and sweet. :) but with quite a bit of imagery here

    Em

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