Far from your touch...

This feels familiar. I enjoyed the read.

Lovely!

Very poem

Hello Meena,

It feels like an age since I have commented on a poem of yours. I am sorry!

This poem is a lovely little nugget. It manages to convey in 3 short stanza - distance, loss, grief and so much more besides.

In the 1st stanza, you mention distance apart, but how the heart will travel. The word trek suggests, that although the heart (love) will travel willingly, it is a hard going journey.

The 2nd stanza, I like particularly the yawn of the days. Days spent missing someone are long days, feeling very stretched, much like a face that yawns, perhaps? These days a tiring; and if it were not for that embrace, it would feel impossible.

The last stanza, I felt like I was on a coach or a train journey; just gazing out of the window, watching, 'sheets of leaves' pass me by, traveling to my ultimate destination; the one that my hearts desires most. To be with you once more.

Meena, I enjoyed this poem and will try not to return sooner this time.

((hugs)) xx

Awesome write! The longing is indeed forever.
Wonderful work, filled with emotion.

5/5, greatly penned! I read it over and over.

Cheers,
Ray