Comments : One Last Ride

  • 16 years ago

    by rachael

    Is this a true story? the poem's good, saddening, but good.
    rachael=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats a very dedicated poem well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by jessie

    Yes this is a true story I am sad to say. It only happened last sunday. He really did take the curb to fast and died instantly. Thank you guys for the comment they are appreciated.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachele

    Hey thats really good

    well done

    and its sad

    thanks 4 da comment too xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachael

    I think this is a great poem, its really easy to write about someting so tragic in today's world. keep it up 5/5