Comments : My Perfect Suicide

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Good, made me shudder!!! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    So simple yet so effective and sad. Really natural un-forced rhyme. Beautiful. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenmind

    Great poem, dark, just how i like em.
    i agree with my imperfect creation how the flow of the poem is good.
    short but it says everything & hits the spot perfectly.
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Whoaa...
    it bleeds emotion!!! I really like it...My perfect Suicide...wow!! Good job!!
    5/5!!

    --**Skye~

    -Plz check out sum of my poems!!-

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oo I liked it. Short but sweet. I would hope you don't really feel this way. If you could would you please read my poem Another Kid Dies and the Day goes by? If you don't want to I understand. I'm just trying to find more readers and I liked your poem. Five.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristen

    I love this poem...i'm putting it in my top poems.

  • Wow! i really love it! so short but it really does feel like i can relate to it! Awsome! keep it up! xx