This poem was very well written, and one that i can truly relate to. the message sent through your poem is one that most feel, yet still no one understands. as for the last line of the poem.. i agree with zeenat in that it should be a little stronger. the poem is great and therefore i feel the last line should leave a stronger impact!

keep up the great work.

Excellently written and deeply expressed very well, loved the emotions and flow and overall feeling of the poem, also agree with zeenat and take me witht he lastt line, but great write keep it up

I like this good job it really shows how someone can really hid there feelings 5/5

So basically the ending is just beautiful. It was filled with power and completed the poem flawlessly. I am sure many can relate with what you said here which made it even more interesting for me because I could see myself in your words. Well done *5/5*

It was almost like every other stanza went from really good to just ok, first stanza was def the best :) good write but I think you could make it better :) anyhow I totally relate to it, keep it up :)

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. The emotion in it was great and the flow worked so well. The image in this was just amazing. Good job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Repetition is good here, every stanza is well-done
reads very easily
the poem is kinda calm, even simple, but that is what makes you think about the meaning:)

Very lyrically lovely!!! Very sad as well.... This poem is very morbid and definately shows the feeling the writter is trying to express!! great work!

Great poem...it flowed nicely and the rhyming was perfect... i enjoyed reading this one. nice work.5/5

This was such a beautiful tragedy. I absolutely loved your used of words. The rhymes were perfect, flawless. This poem made me sad, but that's definitely not a bad thing, because it means you were able to let your emotions bleed into the poem enough for other people to feel them when they read this. Amazing write, sweetie! :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Good poem....I like it!
Its awesome

-Answer that and stay fashionable mello

Good piece, well written. Some rhymes are too typical, but other than that I really like this poem. I think that many people can relate to the emotions you greatly expressed. The flow is excellent through the whole piece.
My favorite stanza is:

- She'll keep her secrets so well hidden.
Behind her walls of such deception.
And forever she shall be discrete
Of her well concealed oppression. -

Keep writing
5/5

I like the rhymes in this poem. it helps it flow by better. a lot of big words! 5/5 !props!

The description was very well done and the flow was done real well I understood the girl and how she must felt good job bringing the reader into your world

Nice use of words simly great. im have to say im kinda like ur peoetry-
raindrops 5/5

Wonderful poem i can really relate to it which makes me like it even more keep up the wonderful work

You're a wonderful writer.
This poem I can relate to as well, one reason why I probably liked so much, but it was an absolutely beautiful poem. Many people can relate to it actually, and you were perfect at putting this into words.
I really love your word choice, the words just flow so smoothly and easily in your poems.
5/5
~gabriella

Depressingly deep. I love the word usage in this poem. It portrays exactly how "she" feels and leaves the reader intrigued. Nice write... 5/5

I can tell this poem is from the heart. and it is written in such a way that vast variety of people can relate.
5/5
-Syn