The Beast and Her

by Kelly   Feb 11, 2008


She doesn't move, doesn't make a sound,
Eyes locked in terror, she;s face to face with the hound.
She believed he existed, never did she doubt,
But alone and cornered, she cant even shout.

I SENSE HER FEAR, I HEAR HER HEART BEAT,
I BARE MY FANGS FOR ITS TIME TO EAT.
THIS ONE HAS HUNTED ME, LOOKING DAY AND NIGHT,,
I WILL MAKE SURE, I ENJOY MY FIRST BITE.

For years and decades she searched for him,
the most ferocious creature to be created from sin.
She wanted to find him, but it came at a price,
It seems this sighting, will cost her her life

WHY HAS SHE SEARCHED, TO FIND ME HERE,
SHE DOESN'T ATTACK, JUST LOOKS AND SHEDS A TEAR.
I HAVE RAN FROM HER, ON ENDLESS NIGHTS,
ALWAYS RESISTING, OT TAKE THAT FIRST BITE.

She knew him once, in another life,
she had even committed, she was his wife.
She searched the eyes, for the man she once knew,
she knows he's behind there, in the deepest blue.

I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,
i FORGET WHY I RESISTED HER, WELL TONIGHT SHE IS MINE.
FOR AS LONG AS I CAN REMEMBER, I HAVE BEEN THIS BEAST,
AND ON HUMAN FLESH, I LOVE TO FEAST.

There was no trace of, the man she once knew,
nothing but evil in the deepest blue.
She held that knife, close to her side,
to kill him outright, her time she must bide.

I LUNGE AT HER, MORE THAN READY TO KILL,
I FEEL HER COOL BLADE AS IT RIPS AT MY SKIN
I LAND ON HER AND MY FANGS CATCH HER THROAT,
IT SEEMS EVEN IN DEATH WE ARE NEVER APART.

**First time i have written anything in ages so i really appreciate comments and feedback. Please rate. Thanks**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    I love it ! i like the darkness to it.
    and i especially liked how u culd
    split it into 2
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,

    ^ My favourite line :)

    I think you should write the whole story of this as an epic poem! I would definitely read it!

    The lexis is brilliant, but sometimes the rhythm gets lost - some lines are a bit too long in comparison to the others in that stanza.

    Also, thanks very much for your comment on my poem! Xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Hey i havent checked your poems out in a while!

    I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,
    i FORGET WHY I RESISTED HER, WELL TONIGHT SHE IS MINE.

    that was my favourite line - i LOVED this poem, so dark but just really provokative, it was a great read and makes a change. i loved the imagery, it was really dark. 5/5

    Ginnie xxx