Comments : The Beast and Her

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Hey i havent checked your poems out in a while!

    I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,
    i FORGET WHY I RESISTED HER, WELL TONIGHT SHE IS MINE.

    that was my favourite line - i LOVED this poem, so dark but just really provokative, it was a great read and makes a change. i loved the imagery, it was really dark. 5/5

    Ginnie xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Emma

    I HAD MEMORIES OF HER, THEY FADED WITH TIME,

    ^ My favourite line :)

    I think you should write the whole story of this as an epic poem! I would definitely read it!

    The lexis is brilliant, but sometimes the rhythm gets lost - some lines are a bit too long in comparison to the others in that stanza.

    Also, thanks very much for your comment on my poem! Xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I love it ! i like the darkness to it.
    and i especially liked how u culd
    split it into 2
    xx