This is so beautiful, and the girl you wrote this for is very lucky to have you around. :)
I loved the repetition of the last 3 lines of each stanza. :)
The last line just captures it all. You did an amazing job. 5/5
I love your poems. You have the sensational ability to write a beautiful love poem. In my opinion very few can carry out one without sounding cliche. I love the effect of the poem on the reader, leaving the longing feeling for such passionate love. Wanted to be loved as you love another. Beautiful and breathtaking.