Ahmad u never fail to impress me.. ALWAYS!!
this is very heart felt and deep.. u know that everything's only gonna get better from here now.. as for the poem i loved the flow, ur almost effortless rhyming.. thought provoking also like this " And calling you through silence till my throat bleeds""
ALSO ur last para was a killer ending!!
"Now all that's left for me
Are pictures to view, Are notes to read
Are sleepless nights and blind dreams
And calling you through silence till my throat bleeds"
^That was absolutly my favorite stanza-love it-love it-love it
Thus poem was really deep and feeled with so much heartache.I could really tell you put your own emotions into this.Great job.The only thing I saw that bothered me was the 1st line on the last staza.It threw me off a little but other then that-awesome job.5/5
Aww wow...this poem really made me feel not so lonely you know. I mean we share the same emotion on this day and it's cool knowing someone out there feels the same. This is a lovely poem portrayed with true emotion. I am adding it to my fave poems. Thanks for the inspiration