Comments : Delicate Hearts

  • 9 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Cindy,
    Absolutely beautiful. You have chosen the memories of your last Valentine with John as a wonderful dedication to the holiday itself and to his memory. Absolutely breathtaking write as always. Beautiful love story. He loves you eternally and you will know not of the longing and want when reunited. Rejoice in his memory and the rare love you two shared.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    This was beautiful, from beginning to end. Every stanza is even more lovlier than the first, but they are all so perfect.
    I particularly loved the line "the world was ours tied with a bow".
    I know exactly the feeling your reminising right now, because I'm fortunate to be in that situation. You've just brought me back down to earth that these feelings don't last forever, and I know I've gotta make the most of it while it's still here.
    Thanks so much Cindy, whether to understand or not, you have helped me. I wish you all the best in your life, and we'll keep in touch.

  • 9 years ago

    by Elapsed

    My gosh this was a beautiful poem!!

    "The world was ours tied with a bow
    Happily reaching for moonbeams
    Invincible lovers without a care
    Following our life's dreams"

    Amazing imagery with awesome word usage!!.. one of the best poems i have read from you Cindy.. *grabs the box of tissues*.. fantastic job Dear.

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So beautiful Cindy....just as your love for John is....a perfect Valentine! ....notice I said is...for it still lives...in every beautiful word you write and every memory you share, you honor that beautiful love you two shared!

    I love the repetition of the first stanza as the ending verse....so romantic.....glad you were able to remember happier days this Valentine's day....something you'll always have...those beautiful memories....Love, Debbie

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Welcome back dear & this is the best possible way to be back

    This is an amazing poem and just made me realize how much i missed your poems. This one goes as the best one read so far in my record book.

    Love songs playing on the radio
    Chocolates strawberries and candlelight
    Sparkling eyes knowing what was to come
    Red roses and passion filled nights

    Beautiful stanza, every word is so very special.

    Keep writing dear...you are the best.

    all the best and take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    The world was ours tied with a bow
    Happily reaching for moonbeams
    Invincible lovers without a care
    Following our life's dreams

    Cindy,

    This stanza is the one I loved best.
    I have a new cd and one of the songs is called "One year of love is better than a lifetime alone"and it's sung by Stevie Ann.
    And I feel she is right...to have a true love is so special, even if it ends...

    Love,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I also love how the first stanza is repeated as the last. A perfect way to end such a sentimental piece. Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    I wish you all the best, Cindy. Good luck and keep strong.

  • 9 years ago

    by chavii

    Cindy, this is the best poem, i have read in recent times. So so beautifully expressed im still filled with awe. Simply amazing.Loved it lot .

    So good to see you writing agagin cindy, welcome back :)

    Love
    chavii.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Perfect and so lovely! Love never dies as you've shown here in your work.

    "Pulled from a box of memories
    Delicate hearts trimmed with lace
    turning them over in my hands
    closing eyes envisioning your face"

    These lines got me thinking of some of my past loves.

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a beautiful poem.
    You have very deep memories.. Thank you for sharing them with us..
    Loved reading this piece
    Take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love that! its awesome. Good job =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Oh my dear friend ... this read truly brought tears to my eyes.

    These memories all I have of you
    Keeping me company since you're gone
    Treasured times of years gone by
    Keeping you with me our love lives on

    ^^^
    A beautiful love such as the one you both shared will always live on hun.
    Touching write dear friend!

  • 9 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow your poems are all great! your choice of words are like magic it really amazes the reader. Once again the flow was flawless, I love first stanza it really grabs the attention of the reader - you even repeated it at the end, excellent job! :)

    many thanks for your comment :)
    5/5! as always

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wonderful ... every thing you write is wonderful