I just loved the word choice here. It really stengthened the mood you wished to create. The flow was flawless and the pace was hauntingly amazing. The ending stanza was perfect and just left me with a bang. Well done *5/5*

Oooooo, I like! The title reminded me of the show "Without a Trace". I loved your use of words, they were amazing! ^.^ I was feel extreme guilt while I read this, probably because I've had lots and lots of thoughts like that. Anyways, greattt poem! :]]]

Cayce xx

Oh god I liked that a lot actually. I don't know how to explain it but basically I liked the first stanza. How it was written. Just the discriptive words or something. Well done, truely good job. Only problem was I was a little confused. Don't worry it is a good problem. Makes me interested into the meaning of the poem

Omfg. This poem was like :O ah mazing! It was like. .too amazing for words. I really really liked it. This piece was so detailed and I felt like I was there! I love the title and it fit well into the last line. I can't pick a favorite stanza. This is going into my favorites! :] 5/5.

I love it i love it's amazing you should rate and comment my poems

The 1st stanza is amazingly written. It was descriptive, and it really drew me into the poem. The only thing I didn't like was "Controlling, anger, building inside my fist," , "anger" just seems out of place for some reason. Maybe it's just me.

"Why do I have to be like this, Scared and alone,"
^ I don't think "Scared" should be capitalized. :/

Other than those two things, this poem was phenominal. The imagery was vivid, the emotions were intense, and the flow was perfect. Overall: 5.5

- Steph.

Wow. i had to remember to breathe...lol. uh, just so u no, the one of mine u read was more like me venting than writing, so if u have a sec, read a dif one por favor? thanks tho!!

Woah......the pace, rhythm and flow were fantastic. As was the rhyme and vocab and just everything rocked! My favourite line without a doubt was:

"Everything is falling fast, hard, and apart."

It's like "bam! bam! bam!" kinda like the sound of stuff falling down. Wowee. That's clever. 5/5

Em xXx

Not only is this dark poem very well written it has a depth that is very stimulating
The hook is very interesting, in other words there is a certain mystery in the title without a doubt traceable or maybe not? Great poem

Very great write. Its truly fantastic... The way it flowed, the way you've used your words to create such an emotional piece, and the concept... So well-written and dark... 5/5 for a truly admirable write.

The first verse of this poem didn't rhyme like the others that followed.

I think that was the only problem I found wrong with this poem. Overall, it was well written. The idea, well, everyone writes these poems. The interesting part about it, is seeing how they write it. I thought it was well done.

This was well written i love the use of the descriptive words used this made the poem alot more appealing to me and helped me understand the emotion
not a single line of the poem was boring it kept my attention and kept me reading

5/5

Great Job! This had a lot of emotion I really felt it.. Your rhyming was superb. And your vocabulary was amazing! I really liked your flow here.. everything just bounced along perfectly. My favorite lines were:

I know they'll know the secret, as soon as they see this face,
Unless I end it here and now I'm left without a trace.

So much power and emotion, great job!

5.5

Emotional poem, intense, really good
5/5