I'm sure this will do great in the contest! The flow was awsome. You expressed you emotions really well, it was so sad. I actually liked that it didn't rhyme too, and usually I'm big on rhyming! So great job!

Cayce xx

Wow babe, this poem was so beautiful. I know it's not going directly to me because you know I love you with all my heart. I noticed you entered this in the contest I also entered. Espero que te valla bien amor mio. Te amo y me encanto este poema! Muah!!

.:CiNdY:.

Aw. loved this poem..even though i dont like poems that dont rhyme..this one really interested me... i guess because it sounded like real feelings.

good job..keep it up.5/5

I like this part a lot
"Baby don't do yourself harm,
Knowing that you love me.
You will always be in my thoughts,
And you know there won't be anyone like me"
its a beautiful poem. the flow and rythem wern't on quite right but it still worked. nice
job. 5/5 !props!

This was really sweet and honest and full of emotion that you conveyed really well. The flow was sometimes a little off because of the order of the words but otherwise I really enjoyed it.

Em xXx

I liked it. It was filled with emotion and it flowed well. There were a few parts, though, that seemed a little unnecessary and made the poem feel like it was dragging on and on. Maybe if a few stanza's were deleted it would sound better. Still a good poem. 5/5