This piece was very unique as well. And I really like it. Every line was expressed so beautifully. And I really liked the structure. And the lines that came after PS were my favorite ones! You ended this piece flawlessly. 5/5.

OMG
I am in awe!
this was so amazing! definately adding it to my favorites.
Everything stuck out to me.
Although i didnt really like the "PS" thing. I dont know why.
But still, fantastic
5/5

I really love this poem although the PS kind of broke up the flow a little. It's really nice and different to what I normally get to read. My favourite lines:

"It would have been enough if I was given life
but I received something more, a reason to live"

Magic.

Em xXx

I love the basic idea, and how it was written...in my opinion very original!

Really sweet and the form of a letter to a reader is a nice idea, makes the poem very personal
nice use of repetitions, it really does work here
and the idea about precious things like love, friendship etc
and btw gradation (beauty-voices of my loved ones-memories-people-a reason to live) here works perfectly, it keeped me interested to read the end of the poem
5/5

Huh.... Good work :)

Thanks for your suggestions, I've omitted the P.S and hopefully this flows much smoother.