This is deeep and alot of passion

5/5

THIS IS A CRAZY STORY..AND IT WOULD BE ONE OF THOSE THAT WOULD BELONG IN MY FAVS..5/5..CONTINUE WHAT YOU ARE DOING GURL..I LIKES THAT..

It has a lot of passion and commitmont, good choice of words, 5/5

Wow......what a really good story...i love this. great job and i felt so sad for the guy.....wow you really know how to put emotions into this. great job. i love it. =)

Wow. im speechless...
that was soo powerful... real emotions. made it feel like I was the one in the story.