Too much sorrow

by waiting 4 some1   Feb 19, 2008


My heart is affected by a poisoned arrow
Too much pain and too much sorrow
You are gone again, my life becomes shallow
Depressed as if there is no tomorrow

Please my love, I need a break
Come back to me, please awake
I am drowning in my own fear's lake
Come back please for our love sake

With you in my life the road was easy to follow
But since you have gone it became so rough and narrow
I need your love again if you will let me borrow
I need it to fill my heart for it became hollow

People think I am fine, a common mistake
They don't know that soon I am going to break
And they will find out my smiles are all fake
But they will never know the source of my ache

I never thought a girl can cause me this much sorrow
You just disappeared and my face turned sallow
I became your servant and you became the pharaoh
This is the truth, although the truth is hard to swallow

My heart becomes so weak and easy to shake
My life still moving not knowing to brake
And I don't know how much more pain I can take
But I will wait for you although waiting
is not a piece of cake

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Wonderful poem..so nicely described..
    everything is so perfectly mentioned..i especially loved the second stanza.
    thanks for sharing!

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Thats kindof how I'm feeling right now... On my profile it says I love to smile but... As of right now I think I might change it. Bit anyways that was a great poem.... I loved it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Thats kindof how I'm feeling right now... On my profile it says I love to smile but... As of right now I think I might change it. Bit anyways that was a great poem.... I loved it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow. a lovely piece indeed! i can really relate to this.

    Please my love, I need a break
    Come back to me, please awake
    I am drowning in my own fear's lake
    Come back please for our love sake

    i loved that stanza the most. you expressed yerself very well. keep up the lovely work! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by MoveAlong

    I lv it. Full of truth and meaning. Keep it up.