Hi there lil bro!

Very nice poem by you:))))
The hardest thing in life is not to know where you stand and to just wait for the other person to make it known, isn't it?

Take care,

hugs from your big sis,

Ingrid

OMG!!!!!!
Adel this is one of ur bests 5/5

Its a very sad and powerfull poem :) i really enjoyed reading it :)

Another very nice piece of poetry. 5/5

Great poem...I have had same kind of feelings...I can feel the pain..

Really nice poem and sad,but u know why i love ur poems?
becoz in ur poems u show how kind u are,and how the person u love is cruel :( if u get what i mean

5/5

Great poem :D
i really liked the first stanza, it's really emotive.
keep up the great work. :)

Wow....very deep....very sad=/

This is great, i can fill your pain in your words, that to me is what a good poet is all about....keep it up

I love it ! you did a good job! lol i i laugh cuz i know who you talk about .

I know how that feels, I like this poem for it has a lot of emotion in it.

Wonderfull poem it's very sad and exppressive, i really know how that feels that why i really feel :-( when i read it. good work

"People think I am fine, a common mistake
They don't know that soon I am going to break
And they will find out my smiles are all fake
But they will never know the source of my ache"
i like this lines very very much.
and i have the same feeling especially these days. i was really glad to read this poem.

I like the cute ending. Good job. 5/5

Wow ! I am speechless...This is beyond good. To tell you the truth right now I feel just like you wrote... Keep writing
5/5

Again I lovvvve the ending
Your writing has improved a lot

Wow! that was awsome. this is extremely well writen. i give it a 5/5

Really good! I feel your pain!

I really like it.
u got talent :)
ur a really good writer, and i wuld
like ur opinion on some of my stuff,
if u have time.
xx

Hey i realli like it.
i wuld really like some1
like u with ur talent to read my
stuff so i can get better.
if u have time.
xx