No wonder you picked this piece for me to comment and I'm happy you chose this one, you are really wise, Sir and nobody would ever dare to say otherwise! :) I kind of grasped the meaning of the poem as a whole, yet, there are few images and metaphors that were a bit mysterious to me, I'll PM you them when I'm done commenting. :)

I don't know if I'm mistaken...but there is something I'd like to criticize, if you just allow me. :)

Life Owes Us a dying;
^^^
Why capitalizing the "O" and "U"
is this a title of some story, poem, song...etc?? that you used in your poem??

-And another thing, I'd like to mention...well, it is not a 'thing' ...it is my opinion nothing more believe me! Uhhhm I think if you cut your poems into tiny stanzas, they will really look more powerful and catchy! but nevermind me that's just an opinion I wanted to share. Thank you for the most enjoyable read, great talent, Sir. :)