Comments : Desires of Malice

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sammy,

    How very beautiful in all it's darkness!
    I loved it!!

    kisses and hugs,

    Ingrid 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    What a deep and intense piece you have penned here. The imagery is awesome.

    As the souls of men are filled by pleasurable lies
    Desires of malice taunt the wings of liberty
    Relinquishing the freedom of hope
    Lying to rest thoughts of a peaceful death

    Love your ending.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    Wonderful poem i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Great poem. :)