Sin City

by Adam Murphy   Feb 22, 2008


This city of sin
with so much to see
yet I'm staring at her
... right beside me
the lights of the city
shine on her face
she smiles in awe
my heart starts to race
we stroll along
pushing through crowds
and my feelings begin
to peek through their shrouds
I poke and i tease
we banter and play
if time has to freeze
let it be on this day
her hand squeezes mine
our bodies press tight
as we drift along
on a warm starry night
dozens of doors
with things to amaze
and still its her
who's stolen my gaze
we walk inside
more games bring her near
is a kiss what she wants?
i hold back in fear
but the look in her eyes
tells me I'm right
and one perfect kiss
seals a great night

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well written - I enjoyed this

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Really loved this one even better than the movie xD you really are talented keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem has a very good flow carried throughout and the rhyming was consistant great job ^^
    I enjoyed reading this, very sweet poem

  • 16 years ago

    by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ

    THAT WAS SO GOOD!! omg she must be great if thats the way you think bout her haha knowing me id be wandering in random places haahaa Yea well 10/5
    it was like great the words fit like perfectly :)

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