Comments : Why Not Be Yourself?

  • 9 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    Very inspiring, I could relate to this poem. Nice job, thanks for the comment on my poem! Hope to read more of your work soon.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is some of the best rhyming I've ever seen! And I love the message behind the poem.

    "Why not dance off-beat while singing out of tune?"

    That's basically the story of my life =D This is a really great write that made me smile. 5/5 for sure.

    Em xXx

  • 9 years ago

    by Connie

    What a great topic, and very well written!
    Why not have the courage to stand up and speak for mind?
    Be the first to take that step ahead for all mankind?

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was a great write. It kept my attention the whole time! The flow was a little shaky, the word choice was great, and the concept was beautiful... Great job on this! 5/5 :P

  • 9 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I love this poems message i actually wrote a poem like this too very nice 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Wow i love the way you expressed yourself.
    i love this poem and it so true everyone should always be theirselves and not be a copy.
    the flow was a little off but it still kept me reading
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by benjamin

    I absolutely loved this poem... the repetition and rhyming was great... hope you write more poems... good luck with future ones too

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very good. A great subject to write on. Too bad most people really truely do care about what people think.

    "Why not scream out loud and let yourself feel free?
    And take a chance without the promise of a guarantee. "

    I loved that. TAKE A RISK! very creative.
    Good flow too.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Congrats.A rare poem.Beautiful message.Very inspiring.Great flow.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Well said. loved it :]

  • 9 years ago

    by Blackstar

    I really like this one
    I think your right

    just be yourself..

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by your love is mine

    More people should be like you and that is true.

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Wow, this is amazing. :) I loved it. Great work! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Happy without a reason

    I love this poem...amazing ^^

  • 9 years ago

    by shantavia

    I loved it its so ture

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow... this poem is great, you got a great flow and a great choice of words... I loved it! Why not??!!! lolz

  • 9 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is such a wonderfull poem! Total respect for you, for writing it.
    Nice flow and while I was reading it, it really made me think about everything that was written!
    Absolutely worth a 5/5 =]
    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    This poem is hot I love it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Why not try to shine, instead of fading gray?
    Be yourself and just be you, forgetting Them and They.

    .. very Inspiring poem... loved it..

  • 9 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Awesome poem, it show's how much people try to fit in when they should be themselves. Who cares what other's think you should just be yourself and do what makes you happy.5/5