I wonder who's this about lol, its so passionate! and beats throwing..
i loved the strength i senses in the emotions of the 1st person, thats just beautiful to feel in a love poem.

Normal vision sees you standing
Bedraggled in the pouring rain;

^what a view to give us Larryy!

My spirit's gaze detects the glow -

and that was a very classical word choice!

Your energy flows, your heart spins,
Illumes the rain, reflects the sun,
^
very powerful!

Bathes me in your wet explosion
From nuclear love smoldering.
^
thats the strength in YOUR emotions that am talking about toward THAT person..its very envy(able) lol

and this was a very strong ending!
torrent downs your blaze? that's just
amazinggggggggggggg!

I lean and kiss fiery forehead
And pledge undying non-fulfillment.

^ mind blowing :)/.pleaseeeee tell me for whome u wrote that lol

5/5