Comments : Sides of Me

  • I can't exactly relate to this but I have an older cousin with the smae exact problem.I can understadn how hard it is because sometimes he just breaks down and cries because he has no control over it.But stay strong.Great poem BTW.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandria

    I know what its like to loose control, you feel helpless and alone and possibly you're scared to get to close to someone incase you might hurt them? I have a major anger problem, I get angry very easy and if angry enough..in a lack of terms i 'attack' and I can't remember what I did until I wake up cause I black out after it. But I wish you luck and I give my blessings to you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow..

    i know some friends that suffer from that.

    but the poem is rally good i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. This poem was full of many descriptions about your disorder. It really gave me an insight on what the disorder truly is. Great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Nice poem...
    Is this real story of you...?

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    Wow, i really dont have a response to this, but i do know that this poem has given me a real insight on what a person with this type of disorder, really goes through.

  • 16 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    Ha scary... but this poem it reminds me of the one who has lost sight and goes into a dream... while the man laughing and screaming is my father as i try to run away.

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Top work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    OMG..
    I'm truly speechless..
    that was such a heart-stunning piece..I liked each and every stanza of it.
    writing about your own disorder, I can imagine it's such a hard thing !!

    I hear a voice inside my mind,
    My vision is blurry, I'm going blind,
    He's laughing, not for fun but at me,
    Laughing because hes the reason I can't see,

    this stanza was amazing..I don't know if I should post every stanza here and express how much I liked it !
    beautifully written.

    It's starting again, I can feel,
    Coming on so strong, it's unreal,
    My head is spinning, I can't think,
    Confusion is winning, my hopes sink,

    this one, as a starting stanza was very captivating, one of the things that truly matter to me is the beginning of the poem and the title..I see you took advantage of both. well done

    This piece was intense..I love the way you structured it and your choice of words was brilliant too.
    I hope you'll feel better soon
    Amazing write
    Seems like I'll have to add you to my fave authors
    you're such an inspiration <3

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    Sweet poem dude LOL =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    Sweet poem dude LOL =)