Wow...
this is really really really good!

I like the way you write, great poem 5/5

Anquish is evident and silent

Wow. that is sooo sad....the emotions come through strongly, the sadness, the guilt, the shame....wow.

Pasts that still haunt,
Both at day and by night,
Lives forever altered,
By something far from right.

^ definitely my favorite stanza....

keep up the amazingrificsplendiforimatic work. ^_^

(this shows you're worth something, hun)

Wow. that is sooo sad....the emotions come through strongly, the sadness, the guilt, the shame....wow.

Pasts that still haunt,
Both at day and by night,
Lives forever altered,
By something far from right.

^ definitely my favorite stanza....

keep up the amazingrificsplendiforimatic work. ^_^

(this shows you're worth something, hun)

U r talented..The poem is stunning,I did like the way u wrote it so muchhhhhh...keep it up5/5