Very nice poem. It conveys the emotions well, and sort of makes you want to go save 'her'. Well done.

Strong words. 5/5

Wow
that was a very strong poem
it's amazing

great job
you're right
i did like it

Hits close to home with some1 i know hmm your very good im interested in how long you have writtin for thank you fer your comment on my poem i have some others you may like 2

This was a strong poem. It had a good flow and a powerfull imagery....this was awesome.

Excellent!- I really like this poem you really set the emotions in this one.. I can totally relate thank you.. 5/5

Wow....i know that is...good job

Yea this is a really good poem i really like it a lot

I realy like it!!!! you should read more of mine and tell me wat u think

Beautiful poem.
I can relate to this.
5/5.

Sincerely, Sammie-Lee.