I like that, its so simple yet so obvious! =) really good writing, makes it pretty clear =)
thanks for the comment on one of mine =)
xo

Great poem. 5/5

Great poem, it's really sad that this is so true in our culture these days. All those girls with so much more then they could ever need while half of the world population doesn't even have basic needs met. Great message:)

I realy injoyed this oh and thanx for comenting on my peom

I love it. its funny, but true in a sad way. the writing was good too. :o)

thanks for the comment.

You seem to be able to relate to commentaries about societies problems in a more uplifting way than me.

That is a great poem and its so sad that its true for most people.

A very thoughtful (and mature) view of materialism and our superficial consumer society. Excellent ,well done.

Very creative!!!

I like this, it really put's into perspective on what the world has turned female's into.
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Thanks to EVERYONE who has commented and/or rated this poem. i appreciate it more than you will EVER know!!!

Firstly, I loved the title, it's very eye catching and intriguing. My favorite stanza was the last one. It was very well written in my opinion. I liked what the piece was about, it was unique, which made a nice change.

Brad

Cool poem

Laughed, understood it,
and i loved it, great job! :)

I luv this poem...i have a poem about this kind agirls also called modern barbie!

Wonderful job! XoXo

Nice one! of coarse it isn't easy hun... barbie's a fake perfect and no one is perfect... I mean look at all the jobs she works for instance... it just isn't possible

I must say u've written it very well ..d topic is quite touchy cOz dis vOt is gOing all arOund nOwadyz;every1just sO much vOrried to make deir figures and to appear as sOme one they r n't..keep it up...

This sooo good i love it. its so true too and a lot of people can relate.

Wow this was such a cool poem I really liked the message that it sent to people. wonerful work.. it definatly deserves a spot on the top. well done