Comments : Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Some days you want
    me
    and some days, I think you don't
    care.
    PERFECT LINE

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Its very well writen. good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by DeViN sCoTt

    Thats a great poem. happens to me alot... things go great i think and then they turn bad. but luckily i have been with this man for a few months now and nothing is wrong and nothing will go wrong we are perfect. keep up . hun thingsll get better!

    keepsmilin.
    xox
    shanna

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    Nice peom. good job !