Comments : A gardean angel in the night

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    Thanx. my mother hates me because im cold and cruel. i belive that you are the way u feel. i am a creature of the night!! i love the dark because its my second life away from the abuse. my way out, my own world. i would love to be ur friend if you would let me i think we could learn alot about each other

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    Oh wow that poem you sent me was so amazing. im so glad i could inspire you to write it. i loved it and i could really use an angle with me right now cuz im

    so cold, so alone
    sitting by myself
    sitting there crying
    with no one to hold
    my soul is dying
    by myself, alone
    till one day flesh turns to bone!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    You put that poem on awsome!!! i changed my name its "broken heart bleeding black" i thought it kinda fit how i feel lol

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    Hey baby i wrote this for you

    Body 4 a body

    The day i died
    i became a fallen angle
    you were sent to be my guide
    when my wings turned black
    you were sitting with me when i cried
    sitting next to me in my bed
    so much pain i was feeling
    that i collapsed next to you
    as you lay down and pull me close
    i rest my head on your bare chest
    body for a body
    soul for a soul
    love me and be loved by me
    felling our body heat
    my last tear falls to the floor
    as you kiss my neck
    i forget my pain
    settling down next to in bed
    i pray you never let me me go
    a body for a body
    my soul for your soul
    when i died
    i chose you to be my guide

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    I cant tell me in a pm and ill figure out time to do that babe. im in school and i never use my moms computer. i want to know what you want to tell me please

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    Wow. i really like this. deeefinitely 5/5

  • Aww... I have no words for this poem once again nicely done and love IT!!!

    5/5

    ~Victoria

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great write... love the ending