Comments : Music

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyrehv

    You love music, f i'm not mistaken...
    ahm... in the 3rd paragraph, i think it's "an" instead of "a"...
    ,,i really love music but music don't like me... is it possible??? heheheh

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    I agree with you and have changed it, I appreciate your help.

    If you get a chance to vote on my poem, I would appreciate your opinion.

    Thanks again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    A Colorado kiddo huh? Me too, but not by choice, lol, I moved here two years ago.

    Anyway, this poem was really cool, but cool is such a crapy word. I can tell you must be a musician because you used so much musical termanology, it was great to listen to. You did a great job of setting a different mood in each stanza, to capture the different influences of each kind of music. This was a great write, nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow.. a beautiful poem! I am a music lover myself... musician, artist... so I can share the same love you do about this wonderful creation :) haha

    A universal language
    Calms man and beast
    A wonderful legacy
    Passed down through the ages

    I love that stanza. So true. So beautifully written.
    Great job! and thanks for the comment on my poem !.. yes it is a good thing i didnt get lost haha. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya Mike,
    music really is the 'food of love'
    I enjoyed this Stanza the best:
    A peaceful serenade
    Conjures thoughts of love
    Moonlit night stars above
    Notes drifting on a summer wind

    Well done

    Michael 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a beautiful free verse. Wonderful imagery and good word choice. Something we all can relate to. Who doesn't love music? Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    A universal language
    Calms man and beast
    A wonderful legacy
    Passed down through the ages

    ^^These lines are stunningly perfect..Well expressed of how human feelings affected with jus a beat guitar, piano or drums whatever..Do you often notice when people sing along wit the radio or for those who lack of golden voice simply do it in a whistle..Amazing how music soothe our souls or even mend our broken hear and at the same time, stir the anger within us caused by dishonest lover or so on..hahaha..Amazing piece...Good Job..5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Tiffany

    WOW!!.. I loved it!!.. Im a music lover.. Im always listening or playing music!!.. so I can totally relaye.. great poem!!.. ^-^

  • 15 years ago

    by Orchid Lady

    Wow... living in music myself I could feel this poem in my heart... great writing *5/5 for sure :)